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Reviewer: Robert Bruce Scott Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2020 16:19 Title: Part 1 - Splintered: 16

Another excellent chapter. I don't recall this one - I must have skipped past it on my first read through. But it is not uncommon for me to read a story a few times.

Really nice portrait of Edison.

Thanks!! rbs



Author's Response: Thanks. Here we get a bit of a glimpse of what made Edison into the person he has become. They are no excuse, of course, but hopefully help explain a few things.

Reviewer: Robert Bruce Scott Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2020 16:17 Title: Part 1 - Splintered: 16

Spellchecker chew: Pp beginning "Edison looked passed her..." I think you meant "past"

Thanks!! rbs

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