Reviewer: Robert Bruce Scott Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2020 18:28 Title: Part Four: Charybdis - 3

Looks like a spellchecker chew: the paragraph that starts "Also present where four..." third word should be "were".

Great line "Reality bending nightmares are just another Tuesday..."

Very vivid description of the subspace realm - cinematic. I was able to easily picture it in my mind - especially the wake people were leaving. 

Thanks!! rbs

Author's Response: That's great to hear. I always strife for simplicity in my writing and attempt to evoke clear images in the reader's mind or at least not to confuse matters too much. I also like fast-paced action using as few words as possible without losing impact. A cinematic feel is certainly something I try to go for.