Reviewer: Robert Bruce Scott Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2020 16:40 Title: Part Three: A House Divided - 2

Interesting description of using the transporter for construction - I'm a bit of a technical nerd so always interested in ways of using ST tech that didn't appear on the series. Also good character development for Lif and exposition for the Niners. 

I noticed a couple of places where the spellchecker bit you:
In the paragraph starting with "But the Bajoran security chief..." you describe some of the Niners as wearing shaggy "bears".
In the paragraph starting with "I guess it's my turn to be offended..." you have the word "prize" where I think you meant "price". 

The Niners are an interesting contingent and I'm looking forward to seeing them put to use.

Thanks!! rbs

Author's Response: Thanks for flagging the typos, that's super useful and I'll make sure to get those fixed. The Niners will definitely see action while they are attached to Eagle.