Reviewer: Robert Bruce Scott Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2020 12:58 Title: Part Two: Do No Harm - 2

Nice catch on the "ever shifting nature of spacetime." Provides a note of verisimilitude often missed in fan fiction. A grounding in physics and math.

Nice Mexican standoff - and just a little more.

I appreciate the descriptions of the Krellonians and their ships. They appear to be a very original antagonist - and just a little on the thick-necked bureaucratic side.

Thanks!! rbs

Author's Response: The Krellonians are not the funnest bunch of people around, that's for sure. As is often common with Trek aliens, these guys represent some of the worst attributes of contemporary humans, as will become more evident later in this story.