[Report This]Date: 18 Mar 2022 08:42 Title: Chapter Four
I have to agree with the Marine - really liking Ebnal. Picard he is not. That was a fun little rant.
Also enjoying the unfolding of different Maquis perspectives from Diaz to Kincaid to Galmesh. And a fun process sequence with Lar'ragos and Ariel. Fairly often every scene leads to an action sequence. Including the scenes that don't - as Lar'ragos put it, the "seek" part of seek & destroy - provides verisimilitude and helps the action sequences pop more when they show up.
Nice speech by Sandhurst - good line: “We will not give such aid and comfort to our enemies."
Thanks!! rbs
Date: 11 May 2009 06:08 Title: Chapter Four
Mwaaahahaha! I love Ebnal's little rant at the end there! And to think--the "governor" got it easy! Just imagine if that had been one Surtak Speros handling the "evacuation" of the colony... ;-)
I still want to see Ariel get her ass kicked, and badly. Someone seriously needs to wipe that smug grin off her face.
(Oh, and for a previous chapter--I have to say, I REALLY liked the interaction between Sandhurst and Lar'ragos...as someone that disliked Lar'ragos, somehow that coldness felt right.)
Date: 05 May 2009 20:14 Title: Chapter Four
I kinda like this guy too. Interesting, no shit character. That was a great chapter but I'm looking forward to a little more action. Fortunately, Gibraltar is involved so it won't be long in coming...
Date: 23 Apr 2009 23:37 Title: Chapter Four
Heck of a chapter! First of Sandhurst's speech probably had to be made but damn he certainly means business. This is definitely a battle hardened Sandhurst we are dealing with.
Great characters all round. From our leading cast, the pairing of a century in Pava and Ariel, to our antagonists and bit part bad guys. It's all so well crafted and executed.
I'll be damned if I know where you are going with this, but it's gonna be a thrill.
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2009 19:51 Title: Chapter Four
Another fantastic chapter.
You gotta love seeing Starfleet going on the offensive for once. Not something you see every day. And these guys appear to be serious. God help the Maquis.
I really liked Diaz here unable to delude herself about the changed nature of the Maquis any longer. But still, it's hard to believe that she's lost all her loyalties to her former organization. We'll see.
As for Ebnal; he's something else alright.