Reviewer: kes7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2015 14:15 Title: Chapter 4 Melancholy (Green)

LMAO.  That was well played, with the unisex name and lack of pronouns.  It definitely made for an amusing twist.

However, I believe I remember Kelsey's story, and if I remember correctly, he commits suicide, right?  I hope he never felt like he needed to do that because of this.  I find it hard to believe that anyone on a Federation ship would think of this as a big deal.  I mean, man skirts were a sanctioned uniform option by the TNG era.

Regardless, Kelsey seems like a lonely dude, and I feel sorry for him.

Meanwhile, I see Phlox has been busy. ;-)

Author's Response:

Yeah, you remembered right, Kelsey is a suicide. I haven't gotten to why yet. The character hasn't told me. Maybe he will someday. :)

 

In the meantime, yes, in canon, Phlox and Amanda Cole have 9 kids. Eek.

 

Thanks for your kind review!