Reviews For Semper Fidelis
Reviewer: Robert Bruce Scott Signed 
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Date: 09 Mar 2021 16:53 Title: Part V: The Uneasy Truth: 7
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed how things are coming together here. I like those moments in a story when it starts becoming clear what the connections are. Not sure if I've done this here as well as say in "Shadows in the Haze" but as long as it makes sense in the reader's mind, it works.
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2021 16:53 Title: Part V: The Uneasy Truth: 7
As I suspected, nice pull-together of the various plotlines. It remains to be seen what role Mahoney will play in this. I doubt he is involved in Lam's private war, but he seems to have one going of his own.
Thanks!! rbs
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed how things are coming together here. I like those moments in a story when it starts becoming clear what the connections are. Not sure if I've done this here as well as say in "Shadows in the Haze" but as long as it makes sense in the reader's mind, it works.
Reviewer: Gibraltar Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2015 19:18 Title: Part V: The Uneasy Truth: 7
Author's Response: Yeah, I really wanted Nora to come through here as somebody who truly knows what she's doing, at least as far as leading an assault is concerned. And a little bit of showing off your superior fighting skills never hurts. (well, except the other guys, of course). It also demonstrated, I hope, that Marines and Starfleeters can work well together and do so on Eagle. It's not all like Valeria.
Date: 04 Jul 2015 19:18 Title: Part V: The Uneasy Truth: 7
Nora led the away mission masterfully, and may now have uncovered an important key to defusing this turbulent scenario. That was one hell of an insertion for a 12-person team, and to do so while under fire from both the enemy and your own side... damn!
Author's Response: Yeah, I really wanted Nora to come through here as somebody who truly knows what she's doing, at least as far as leading an assault is concerned. And a little bit of showing off your superior fighting skills never hurts. (well, except the other guys, of course). It also demonstrated, I hope, that Marines and Starfleeters can work well together and do so on Eagle. It's not all like Valeria.