Date: 04 Jan 2015 17:32 Title: Eight
Haha. Always a pleasure to see Levi.
Date: 04 Jan 2015 17:29 Title: Eight
I echo Janeway: temporal mechanics gives me a headache. Sweet scene, though.
Date: 04 Jan 2015 17:27 Title: Eight
Quite a sacrifice. I haven't read your Eriecho stories, but now I'm curious how this all turns out.
Author's Response:
Oh, thanks - I had never (spoiler alert) written H'Shema alive before.
Date: 04 Jan 2015 17:24 Title: Eight
You write Daniels sleeping around the timeline quite a bit, but nice to see he cares somewhat for the consequences. (Unless, of course he plans to go sleep with Wendy, too. Yes, I went there.)
Author's Response:
Ha - he's actually not allowed to return to the MU during Hoshi's lifetime. It's a condition of allowing Jun to live.
Date: 01 Jan 2015 20:12 Title: Eight
Didn't explain it right - I knew who Jun was, and his background and history, but didn't understand the reference at the end to the name 'Wendy' - literally. ;-)
Author's Response:
Oh - it's that she's Jun's wife. Up until that moment, Rick has no idea who his daughter-in-law is. He has to send Tom on a mission to get that information.
Date: 31 Dec 2014 21:08 Title: Eight
Tommy and Takara conversation is like all of your inter-verse dream conversations always leave people wanting more.
Author's Response:
Oh, thank you!
Date: 24 Dec 2014 16:32 Title: Eight
All these bits and pieces were intriguing. "Human Units", pouch feeders, and a dream pregnancy? And there is something so right about a Klingon butcher. I can just see him in a big white apron, all Worfish, dreaming of pancakes.
Well written.
Author's Response:
Oh, thank you so much! They all come together under the one big banner of family. :)
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2014 20:30 Title: Eight
Naughty Otra D’Angelo I am sure she said that just to see Levi reaction.
Still I do like Admiral Carmen Calavicci team have the best parties.
Author's Response:
Oh, I hope so - and poor Levi! All he wants is to just blend into the background.
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2014 20:28 Title: Eight
Nice little drabble.
Yes that must be one massive headache to organize the food and seating planning when you have such large family units, still I bet it is a good old knees up once it gets started.
Author's Response:
They're at least cooperative. But man, the noise!!
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2014 20:26 Title: Eight
Lol, I do like the humor of your stories Jespah,
Yes the headaches of accidental temporal kick-backs and generational ships.
Author's Response:
Oh, many thanks!
Date: 21 Dec 2014 20:23 Title: Eight
So that how H’Shema and Saddik met and poor Eriecho got her name.
In so few words you recreated that horrible prison of Canamar and show what a little miracle Eriecho is.
Author's Response:
She's one of my fave characters (don't tell the others).
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2014 20:18 Title: Eight
So let see what drabble joy you have for us this time Jespah.
Well it seem Daniels can’t keep away from his Mirror family, to see an harsh Emperor soften for his daughter name Wendy.
Nicely done.
Author's Response:
Oh, thank you! :)
Date: 30 May 2014 00:03 Title: Across the Universe
Hmmm, interesting. And here we go again, warp eight to Sha Ka Ree. I wonder what will happen when Sybok meets Spock-Quinto.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading!
Date: 14 Feb 2014 19:25 Title: Across the Universe
So this is TFF a la NuTrek. I love.
Author's Response:
Aw, many thanks!
Date: 04 Feb 2014 23:36 Title: Across the Universe
Now that is a very nice conclusion, the wounds are healing in un-expecting way and maybe the future will be better. What a nice way to end, I do hope we get to see Eriecho wedding day.
Author's Response:
At some point, I will write that. Thank you again for your kind reviews.
Date: 04 Feb 2014 23:33 Title: Across the Universe
O that is nicely done Jespah, you’ve manage to fix Spock Prime, Sybok AOS and Eriecho, though I do wonder what Eriecho Prime fate was now.
Eriecho learn the hard lesson and finding that those who care will accept her for who she truly is, suppress emotions or not.
Author's Response:
I don't know what Eriecho Prime would have been like. Probably just your standard Vulcan gal.
Date: 04 Feb 2014 23:27 Title: Across the Universe
Poor Eriecho, she seems to be snapping at her closest friends because of Sybok influence and her own self-doubts. You’ve done a great job of weaving this tale.
Spock Prime vs. AOS Sybok should be…interesting.
Author's Response:
:)
Date: 04 Feb 2014 23:12 Title: Across the Universe
Sybok vs. Eriecho, this is just getting better and better.
Plus the return of T’Bek, who I think you use to great effect to show Eriecho inner turmoil, and the normal Vulcan bad feeling towards the V’tosh Ka’tur.
Author's Response:
Well, it was YOUR idea that Eriecho would be getting suppression training. So, thank you for the plot bunny!!
Date: 04 Feb 2014 22:59 Title: Across the Universe
So the temporal twist of the AOS Butterfly is showing, will we see Sybok and Eriecho together in the near future? Everybody voice sounds right and it’s already better that STV ;-)
Author's Response:
Ha, thank you - I realize the bar was set kinda low.
Date: 04 Feb 2014 22:46 Title: Across the Universe
Oh poor Eriecho, trying to fit in and not just been who she is. Again you’ve done a good and I believe realistic look at how Eriecho time as the sanctuary outsider has began to affect Eriecho self views. Here hoping her friend can reach her in time with the message be yourselves.
Looking forward to the next part.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 04 Feb 2014 22:25 Title: Across the Universe
Good opening tease as always, Prose and language use is up to your normal high standards. Looking forward to seeing where this go.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 02 Feb 2014 20:49 Title: Across the Universe
Nice neat little resolutions all round here. So good to see Eriecho see a truer path for herself.
Author's Response:
She's learning that her assumptions of what Sollastek wants, and what he needs, aren't necessarily correct.