Date: 13 Jun 2013 01:13 Title: Chapter 12
Whew! Another great, exciting sequence!
I really loved the bow to canon - of course Wesley Crusher created a static warp bubble in Remember Me, and now there's a weaponized use for it.
Date: 12 Jan 2010 22:57 Title: Chapter 12
Wow! I wonder do the crew of the Redemption understand how devious and smart their commanding officers are. Two perfectly executed and brilliant plans from Ba'el and Kalara. Really good scenarios you've written. Exciting and action packed with a fast pace and an element of the unknown. Really well done.
Author's Response: Yeah, Ba'el and Kalara are both sneaky b*****ds! :) They know their stuff and have good tactical know-how. I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter.
[Report This]Date: 11 Sep 2009 09:43 Title: Chapter 12
Damn right we save the ship. What a heroic battle. Jesus, this is some of the best action sequences I've ever read-and I've read a lot! Excellent. A "10" !
[Report This]Date: 10 Sep 2009 22:51 Title: Chapter 12
*Whew* That was a nail-biter, and it's not even close to being over yet. Turner's timing is spot-on, and Ba'el has proven to have nerves of neutronium. 
I very much appreciated Kalara's moment of self-analysis when she discovers the thing hampering her instincts in battle is her feelings for her husband and her concern for his safety. Nice to see that gives even a Klingon warrior pause.
Pray continue, sir!