Date: 11 Jun 2013 01:24 Title: Chapter 2
Oh, Kalara. I love you already.
And I'd be pretty peeved, too.
I love the interplay with Damien, too - they feel very real and very loving, despite their obvious differences. It feels like it works for them.
Date: 08 Dec 2009 14:44 Title: Chapter 2
Ah politics afoot and things are in motion at Starfleet Command - on Romulus no less - and the Klingons abandoned the Federation! Hmmm ... this gets all the more interesting as we go. Intriguing threads being spun out I wonder how they'll tie together again. Good stuff.
Nice character introductions and Kalara seems a feisty and stubborn commander. Hers should be an interesting tale. Now what does this have to do with our previous protagonist. Is she going to be deprived of command for him.
And our Ferengi friend - he wouldn't be Nog per chance? Hmmm ... lots of interesting developments and characters. This continues to be a very strong introduction to the story.
Author's Response: Hi again, Yes, lots of politics amongst Starfleet in this universe. I thought that moving Starfleet Command to Romulus would show once and for all how far away we were from the universe we know and love. Yes, the Klingons abandoned Starfleet, abandoned the whole Alpha Quadrant in fact, during the war with the Dominion, something that resonates for them throughout this history. Glad you liked Kalara, most readers seem to enjoy her the most out of all my characters. She is feisty, and stubborn, and passionate, and strong, and fragile. She is probably one of my most developed characters. To answer your questions, yes, she is going to be deprived of command for Ba'el, or so it seems at this point... :) And no, unfortunately our Ferengi friend isn't Nog - this is set many hundreds of years after "our" time, so few of the people we know and love in this universe.
Date: 05 Sep 2009 02:28 Title: Chapter 2
And pulling the command carpet out from under a new captain is bad enough... but doing that to a Klingon? That's courting suicide! 
An intriguing plot, fascinating characters, and lots of promise.