Date: 28 Jul 2009 08:40 Title: Part Two, Chapter One
In some ways, it's very reminiscent of Fahrenheit 451. Same kind of ban-everything-that-disturbs-things schism. Interesting take on religions and nationalities creeps in there, too. Intriguing work. Really.
Author's Response: Really? I've never read Fahrenheit 451, but I've heard of it, so I'll take that as a compliment. And I'm afraid my religious views end up creeping into everything I write, whether or not they have anything to do with the story... anyway, thank you very much!
Date: 07 Jul 2009 20:59 Title: Part Two, Chapter One
Rand's going to be trouble. I like the gift-what a great idea-Tolkein banned? I'd like to see the Enforcers try to get rid of every copy-fat chance.This is a very evil society you have created. I really want to know the underlying causes.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! And I have something very special in mind for Rand...
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2009 06:04 Title: Part Two, Chapter One
Awww... look at that building crew! Liked the Number One and Spock interaction, and the continued dystopian feel.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I like writing Number One and Spock almost as much as I like writing Chapel and Spock... and dystopian, that was the word I was looking for. Again, thank you.