Reviews For Star Crossed
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Reviewer: Robert Bruce Scott Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2021 17:04 Title: Chapter 13

Cliffhanger again! Really good action sequence. And too bad about the Ariolo - he was an interesting character. But space is a rough place to work. So Taz lost her arm? I don't recall an mention of a prosthetic...

Fun - Thanks! rbs



Author's Response: Yep, Star wears a cybernetic arm in future stories. There are hints towards this dropped in from time to time.

Reviewer: Shada Dukal Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2014 17:17 Title: Chapter 13

This was a dramatic chapter loaded with action and losses. First, the battle in the dark, then the explosive decompression. Too bad that N’ek’too was killed. I refused to believe it was only loyalty. Loyalty is such a rare commodity that I see conspiracies everywhere. Still, Shuun knows better than being captured by an angry interstellar criminal who is likely to make an example of him. Star really had a tough choice – a former lover against a current dependence. She did her best given the circumstances. I hope her injured arm can be healed.
I respect her choices – whatever she did, she paid the price for it, in fact, she paid it twice. And it will be with her forever. It has never been about how good or how bad someone is – you either have the guts to do what has to be done and face the consequences or not. You are either a survivor or a victim. Everything else is a matter of vantage point. I really like the way you present her actions and decisions – she never gives up fighting no matter how slim her chances are.

Author's Response: It's a big turning point for Star, I think that much is clear. She made her choices here and now she will have to live with them. What that means for her future we'll find out in the following stories.

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