[Report This]Date: 31 Dec 2020 15:36 Title: Chapter 12
And another cliff hanger!
Very entertaining space battle sequence. It's difficult to keep space battles interesting and any serious Trek story is probably going to have a few. Glad to see you rising to the challenge.
I'm assuming the Bluefin characters are the borrowed ones - nicely portrayed.
Thanks! rbs
Author's Response: Yeah, I may have said this before, but space battles are no longer coming easily to me and I do get a bit bored with writing them. If I do, I feel like they need some sort of twist or angle to make them more interesting and stand out from the norm. I may not always succeed in doing that well.
Date: 09 Oct 2014 23:34 Title: Chapter 12
A great space battle! The details about the torpedo loading are interesting. The reverse maneuver and the tractor beam strategy can help them to keep the firebomb vessel at bay. Schwarzkopf paid a heavy price for underestimating the tactics of the border criminals. They may not have big impressive ships but have the brains to conceive devious plans. Akinola behaves very professionally and his crew acts quickly and efficiently.
Author's Response: Yep, Akinola has been around the block a few times, and it shows.