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Reviewer: Robert Bruce Scott Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2020 14:55 Title: Chapter 8

Akinola and his crew pop right off the page in this scene, especially the interaction between Akinola and Gralt. Red-skinned orion? That's a new wrinkle...

So it appears Schwarzkopf is a little wet behind the ears as well. 

Good technobabble - and you don't have good Trek without good technobabble.

 

Thanks!! rbs



Author's Response: Akinola is a wonderful character and so are the other members of his Bluefin crew. Kudos once more to TheLoneRedshirt who has created these characters and crafted such terrific stories with them.

Reviewer: Shada Dukal Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2014 23:02 Title: Chapter 8

Akinola is a great captain but it seems to me that all great captains are sidetracked so that ambitious idiots like Schwarzkopf can show off their incompetence. Having in mind Solly Brin’s comment, I would rename this nuisance “Scheisskopf”.

Author's Response: Yeah, I know, it's a little cliched. But it does set up quite a bit of the story which follows this one in All The Sinners, Saints (sorry, not yet on Ad Astra, but you can find it at StarEagleAdventures.com). Many of these characters return in that one and as you can imagine, it won't be the prettiest reunion.

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