[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2020 13:07 Title: Day Two: The Getaway: VI
Having nothing but a half-foot of metal and a new-fangled em field between you and deadly radiation is excitement enough...
Very fun obersvations on proper vulcan wheedling. Again, very interesting to have a group of non-humans interacting - although the tactical officer is half-human.
Of course that disturbance is likely to turn out to be... disturbing.
Thanks!! rbs
Author's Response: Disturbances are never a good sign in Trek, we know this.
Date: 06 Apr 2014 14:09 Title: Day Two: The Getaway: VI
Srena! Yay. Happy squee to see this character from Longest Day being brought into the fold.She's got plenty of enthusiasm here for the mission and it is interesting that Srena's enthusiasm tempers Deen's and makes Deen a little more introspective about potential pitfalls and the realities of the situation. That said, both women were very keen to divert from the meticulous plan and to explore this new query. Lots of questions. Lots of possibilites. No doubt, lots of trouble.
Meantime, the Deen/Xylion odd ball partnership seems to be working well in terms of character dynamic and was a great choice for the story. It adds a subtle layer of humour and it brings more warmth to the character of Xylion. The comments about bribing with credit on the paper were fititngly in character and fun.
Well bringing the tactical officer on board could be a blessing for the runabout crew given the mysteries to be discovered. Or it could be a curse for the ship left behind. Outfitting a spy array in a nebula seems a perfect spot for potential trouble if you ask me.
Author's Response: Glad you're a fan of Srena, I like her character, too. She's become such a regular guest character since Eagle 3, she might as well be considered a principle by now. The Deen/Xylion pairing is a lot of fun, makes me wonder why I didn't do this sooner.
Date: 08 Jan 2014 22:43 Title: Day Two: The Getaway: VI
Mysterious discovery in a nebula? Sounds like trouble. I think the tactical officer will come in handy soon.
Author's Response: When do tactical officers not come in handy?